Thanks to everyone for leaving comments on the first draft of the Manifesto for a Creative Tallis. Putting it up on iWork.com seems to have worked pretty well and it was great to be able to download the document into Pages with all of the comments attached (see above). This made the editing process very straightforward.
I have attempted to incorporate all the suggestions into the latest draft. You should all have received an email inviting you to comment on the newest version. I will print this on Tuesday to give to the Leadership Team for further consultation so you have until then to have your say.